Authors notes

 This is my first draft. I like what I wrote because I feel it sounds very descriptive. But i know i need to work on some paragraphs to make them longer and with stronger content. I am not sure If on this kind of essays I am able to describe what I feel whenever I am experiencing the space. In various occasions, i included my opinion and the experience i had  analyzing the space. By the end of the fourth page I was out of ideas. I would appreciate if you could help me explain myself better whenever you think I was not clear because i tend to mix ideas and its hard for me to explain myself.